So this one intended as a travel montage with the central image being the “current” image, but it didn’t quite come across how I’d hoped.
Ah well, lesson learned for next time, I suppose…and at least we don’t have to spend more than one page on this stuff.
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I think it did it’s job. The order is a bit hard to follow, but it looks like a day in the life of this poor guy.
Yeah when I saw that the order was not reading correctly I knew I’d messed it up…but by that point it was done. It seemed like a good idea in my head, ah well, now I know for next time.
I think the idea would have worked if the bottom right and left panels were directly connected with the traveling one in the center of the page… but that would have only left room for a head shot which I don’t think would have been as interesting as the full body view
Oh yeah, that probably would’ve worked. A bit easier than how I was thinking I’d do it if I had the time – which was to have the other panels kinda floating in the background and have the central one be the only “solid” one. Your thought it a lot more straightforward, I like it.